The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar graph demonstrates how much money was spent on five main categories in the USA, China, the UK, and Japan in 2009.
Overall
, the largest proportion of money was allocated to housing, whereas
clothing and healthcare were the least popular among the four countries
.
To begin
with, all the shares of housing expenditures in the four countries
constituted approximately the same, accounting for between 20% and 25%. However
, there were significant differences among countries
in terms of food, which the figure for Japan was noticeably higher than that of the US by a large margin of 10%. Regarding transportation expenses, Canada took the first place with the
percentage of 20%, Correct article usage
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while
the lowest spending level was attributed to Japan with 10%.
To continue with, the shares of healthcare and clothing were lower than 10% in all countries
. While
the USA ranked first in terms of the
medical expenditures with Correct article usage
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proportion of 10%, Canada gave the preference to spend its money on clothing more than other Correct article usage
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countries
, which constituted just over 5%.Submitted by writingbhos on
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