The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar
chart
demonstrated the 4 other Fix the agreement mistake
charts
pathway
for higher education Fix the agreement mistake
pathways
students
in the United Kingdom who did not commit to the working field after their graduation in 2008.
First
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The first
chart
displayed the choices of UK colledge
graduates in 2008. 29665 graduates choose to have Correct your spelling
college
further
study
which is the most popular choice among the other three options. The second highest would be working part-time with 17735 students
, with around 12000 difference on
the number of Change preposition
in
students
having further
study
. The least picked option would be doing voluntary work, with only 3500 students
. Almost 9 times fewer than students
having further
study
.
Second
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The second
chart
showed
the destination of UK postgraduates in 2008 which Wrong verb form
shows
have
a Correct subject-verb agreement
has
simillar
pattern Correct your spelling
similar
with
the first Change preposition
to
chart
. Once again the most popular decision for postgraduates are
having Change the verb form
is
further
study
, with 2725 students
. The least popular selection is also
doing voluntary work, with only 345 students
. This
time the number of postgraduates choosing working
part-time is much closer to Change the verb form
to work
students
having further
study
than the first chart
. With only 200 students
differnce
.
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difference
Overall
, both chart
shows a common pattern which
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in which
students
in UK
prefer to have Correct article usage
the UK
further
study
and students
are lessly
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less
like
to participate in voluntary work.Correct your spelling
likely
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