You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph compares the proportion of
shiping
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shipping
from
Australian
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Australia
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to different four regions during the period
1990
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from 1990
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and 2012.
Overall
, four regions experienced different trends during the given period of time.
While
Japan and
US
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the US
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witnessed a downward trend, India and China,
on the other hand
, saw an upward trend. China saw the most dramatic increase from the lowest in 1990 to the highest in 2012. Starting from below 5%, as the second lowest point, in 1990, China
was
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surpassed
US
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the US
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and Japan in around 2003 and 2024 respectively. 
This
increase
also
occured
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occurred
in India, but in 2012, the graph showed
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a gradually
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gradually
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decline.
By contrast
, Japan and
US
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the US
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,
were
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which were
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previously the first and the second in the group, started to fall, with a little help.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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