The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give
the
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information
imformation
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information
about percentages of three potentially
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unhealthy
unhealty
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unhealthy
substances which people eat
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four typical meals,Breakfast,lunch,dinner and snacks.
It is clear that
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the three double-edge nutrients,sodium,saturated fat
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sugar
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the porpotions
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portions
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each are different.People are intake most of Sodium during the dinner,and
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