The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates
amount
of each Add an article
the amount
sectors'
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sector's
shares
in the Use synonyms
economy
of Brazil in the decade before and after 2009.
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Overall
, it can be seen that all four other industries have been facing a decline Linking Words
while
the Finance sector has been experiencing a steady rise.
First of all, in 2009 the number of Financial Linking Words
shares
in Brazil's Use synonyms
economy
was about 30% which was the highest amount among the others and Use synonyms
this
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section
will experience a 10% rise in the next 20 years when it reaches to peak. Use synonyms
In Contrast
, Manufacturing started with 20% Linking Words
shares
in the country's Use synonyms
economy
but it has been facing a dramatic constant decrease in 2029 which Use synonyms
it
will reach one-fourth of its Correct pronoun usage
apply
shares
in comparison to 2009.
Second of all, Use synonyms
although
the food Linking Words
section
and the non-renewable energy Use synonyms
section
saw an increase, 10% and 5% respectively, from 2009 to 2019 both of them will be came back to where they started in 2009. Use synonyms
Also
, the Tourism Linking Words
section
had a quarter share in the Use synonyms
economy
in 2009 and after a minor drop from 20% to 15% in 2019, it will remain at Use synonyms
this
level in 2029.Linking Words
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