The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates
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the amount
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of each
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shares
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in the
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of Brazil in the decade before and after 2009.
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, it can be seen that all four other industries have been facing a decline
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the Finance sector has been experiencing a steady rise. First of all, in 2009 the number of Financial
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in Brazil's
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was about 30% which was the highest amount among the others and
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section
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will experience a 10% rise in the next 20 years when it reaches to peak.
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, Manufacturing started with 20%
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in the country's
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but it has been facing a dramatic constant decrease in 2029 which
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will reach one-fourth of its
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in comparison to 2009. Second of all,
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the food
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and the non-renewable energy
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saw an increase, 10% and 5% respectively, from 2009 to 2019 both of them will be came back to where they started in 2009.
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, the Tourism
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had a quarter share in the
economy
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in 2009 and after a minor drop from 20% to 15% in 2019, it will remain at
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level in 2029.
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