The pie charts show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

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The pie charts compare energy production, with

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from 1995 to 2005.

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The pie charts show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

•In large cities, the issue of overpopulation has been a significant cause of concern which leads to a lack of jobs and traffic congestion. What is the cause of this? How can government help in solving this problem? 1. High burn rates

Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some people thinks it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them, Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagrees with them.