The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the distribution of the population across different age groups employed in various sectors in the United Kingdom in 1998 and 2006.
Overall
, there was a noticeable upward trend in employment within the technology
sector
across all age groups,
whereas
the construction industry witnessed a decline in workforce participation over the same period.
Conversely
, other sectors experienced stable growth. The technology
sector
experienced significant expansion in its workforce. In 1998, it employed the fewest individuals but saw a substantial increase by 2006, becoming the
sector
with the highest percentage of workers.
In contrast
, the construction industry, which employed the largest number of workers in 1998, experienced a continuous decrease in employment, resulting in it becoming the least populated
sector
by 2006. Meanwhile, the Hotel and Catering industry experienced consistent growth from 1998 to 2006, albeit with a higher proportion of younger workers compared to older ones. Surprisingly, the education
sector
saw a reversal in its workforce composition, with a notable increase in mature professionals. The data from the chart indicates a persistent development in employment within the education
sector
over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • workforce distribution
  • significant
  • sector
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • composition
  • employment patterns
  • shift
  • notable
  • preference
  • age group
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • composition
  • reaffirm
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