Writing Task 1 (From Cambridge IELTS Book 4, test 3) You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of
males
and females who achieved various post-school qualifications in Australia in 1999.
overall
, It is evident that Australian men held the higher share in 3 of those degrees, Women, meanwhile, stood first in 2 other qualifications.
Looking at the details, with Correct article usage
an oustanding
oustanding
90% and a mere 10%, Australian men outnumbered their female counterparts in the Skilled vocational Diploma. Correct your spelling
outstanding
Similarly
, 70% of males
completed Postgraduate
Diploma and Correct article usage
a Postgraduate
this
figure stood at 30% for the other Sex. Also
, Just above one-third of females and 60% of males
got their Masters degree.
On the other hand
, Number
of women with Undergraduate degrees approximately doubled that Correct article usage
the Number
for
Change preposition
of
males
, with 70% and about 35%. in
terms of Bachelor's Capitalize word
In
degree
, The figures between genders were quite close to each other, to be specific, half of Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
men
achieved Add an article
the men
this
degree and women stood at 45%.Submitted by soroush.nezami on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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