Writing Task 1 (From Cambridge IELTS Book 4, test 3) You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar graph illustrates the percentage of

males

and females who achieved various post-school qualifications in Australia in 1999.

overall

, It is evident that Australian men held the higher share in 3 of those degrees, Women, meanwhile, stood first in 2 other qualifications. Looking at the details, with

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an oustanding

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oustanding

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outstanding

90% and a mere 10%, Australian men outnumbered their female counterparts in the Skilled vocational Diploma.

Similarly

, 70% of

males

completed

Postgraduate

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a Postgraduate

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Diploma and

this

figure stood at 30% for the other Sex.

Also

, Just above one-third of females and 60% of

males

got their Masters degree.

On the other hand

,

Number

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the Number

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of women with Undergraduate degrees approximately doubled that

for

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of

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males

, with 70% and about 35%.

in

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In

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terms of Bachelor's

degree

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degrees

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, The figures between genders were quite close to each other, to be specific, half of

men

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the men

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achieved

this

degree and women stood at 45%.