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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
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This
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 chart illustrates the proportion of
water
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usage
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 for various reasons in numerous places in the world.
Overall
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, in four places
water
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 is found to have
highest
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the highest
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usage
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 for agricultural purposes and the least
water
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usage
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 was located in Central
Asia
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 for industrial uses.
To begin
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 with, in Central
Asia
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water
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 was mainly used for agricultural motive, the same goes for
Africa
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, South East
Asia
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 and South
America
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 with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71%, all of them have similar numbers.
On the other hand
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, Europe consume the least
water
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 for agricultural intent
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, North
America
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 has a bitter upward
usage
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 of around 7% with a 39% ratio.
In addition
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, Europe has just over a half percentage Industrial
water
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usage
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 of around 53%. Morally, North
America
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 has just more or less than half of approximately 48%.
However
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, other region has comparable parts,South East
Asia
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, South
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and
Africa
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 have ratios of 12%, 10%, 7% and 5%.
Furthermore
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, Domestic
water
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 has the lowest rank in
usage
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 approximately, 10% in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, South East
Asia
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 and around 15% in North
America
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, South
America
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 and Europe.
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