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The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar and line charts below reveal mean monthly
temprature
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temperature
 and washing out vesture
sales
 in New York for the first half period of
year
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the year
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 in 2012.
Overall
, the trend of
tempreture
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temperature
 during the period was upward and the highest recorded
tempreture
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temperature
was
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occured
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occurred
 in June,
however
,
th
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the
 highest number of requests for bathing
suit
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suits
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 was recorded in April.
It is clear that
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the temprature
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temprature
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temperature
temperatures
 in
first
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the first
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 half of the year experienced an upward tendency,
overally
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overall
. In
first
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 month the
temprature
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temperature
 was just over 30
Farenheit
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Fahrenheit
 (F) and the experienced a minor reduction and reached exactly
to
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30 F, in February.
Then
,
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the tempreture
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tempreture gradiant
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temperature gradient
 rose and
finally
, reached
to
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approximately 65 F in June. Revenue from
washing out
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washing-out
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 suit
sales
 saw an upward tendency from January until April and
then
 the recorded amount of
sales
 had a downward trend. The
washing out
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washing-out
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 suit
sales
 touched the highest amount in April just under 300 hundred
thousands dollar
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thousand dollars
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 (HTD) and the lowest amount was recorded in June.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • bathing suit sales
  • correlation
  • monthly breakdown
  • significant changes
  • warmest months
  • speculate
  • trends
  • increase in temperature
  • contrasting
  • predictive speculation
  • general trends
  • specific months
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