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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts give information about the percentage of
water
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 used for different reasons in six countries of the world.
Overall
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, In South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 more than half of
the
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all
water
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 is used for agricultural
use
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.
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, Domestic
use
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 had the lowest percentage of
water
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 in North
America
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 and Europe. Almost every country used most of their
water
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 for agricultural
use
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.
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, o in North
America
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 and Europe,
water
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 was not mostly used for agriculture
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, Industrial
use
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 had the least
water
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 usage in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 But, it had the most
water
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 usage in the other two countries. The
water
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 used for domestic
use
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 had one of the two least usages in every country In South
America
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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 it had the second least percentage of
water
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. But, in North
America
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, Europe and South East
Asia
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 it had the least amount of
water
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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