The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A quick glance at the pie charts
show
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shows
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information about how many
percentage
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percentages
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which
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apply
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are used in six countries of the world.
Overall
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,
water
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in North
America
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does
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is
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not
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use
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used
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for Industrial as much as in Europe. Most countries have used
to
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apply
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water
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for Agriculture and
other
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the other
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two countries used
to
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apply
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water
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for
Industrial
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industry
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more than
other
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the other
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two categories. In terms of explaining
the
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apply
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South and North
America
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, Domestic
water
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use
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is the lowest usage type in
Morth
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North
America
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but in South
America
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, Domestic
use
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id
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is
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the middle of
pie
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the pie
a pie
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chart.
Moreover
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, Agriculture
is using
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uses
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the
much
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most
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water
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in South
America
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about 7%. With regards to enunciating
the
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apply
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Africa, and Asia, Agricultural is the most common
water
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using type in the three areas of the world, around the more than 80%.
On the other hand
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,
Industrial
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the Industrial
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category is not useful in Africa and Central Asia approximately 6%. In the
last
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two pie charts, Domestic
water
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usage is equal and both are 5%.
Nevertheless
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, the percentage of domestic
use
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, at 39% and 13% respectively, in North
America
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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