The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams depict the process of
cement
manufacturing process for producing concrete as the end product.
Add an article
the cement
a cement
Overall
, cement
production can be accomplished by using a mixture of limestone and clay that undergone
5 crafting processes, Add a missing verb
has undergone
then
mixing the cement
with 4 other substances in a concrete mixer, the result of which is concrete.
To produce cement
, limestone and clay need to be crushed altogether using a crusher to form powder, then
combined with the mixer. The powder was, after that, put into a rotating heater tube with the heat pointing at the end
of the outlet. Next,
the mixture was grinded
again to get the Correct your spelling
ground
cement
. Finally
, the final product was packed in the bag.
After getting cement
, to produce concrete, it needs 15% of it, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of small stones, pour all 4 ingredients together and mix them using the concrete mixture, Lastly
, it is now ready to use.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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