The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and

how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams depict the process of
cement
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the cement
a cement
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manufacturing process for producing concrete as the end product.
Overall
,
cement
production can be accomplished by using a mixture of limestone and clay that
undergone
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5 crafting processes,
then
mixing the
cement
with 4 other substances in a concrete mixer, the result of which is concrete. To produce
cement
, limestone and clay need to be crushed altogether using a crusher to form powder,
then
combined with the mixer. The powder was, after that, put into a rotating heater tube with the heat pointing
at the end
of the outlet.
Next,
the mixture was
grinded
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ground
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again to get the
cement
.
Finally
, the final product was packed in the bag. After getting
cement
, to produce concrete, it needs 15% of it, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of small stones, pour all 4 ingredients together and mix them using the concrete mixture,
Lastly
, it is now ready to use.
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