The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams depict the process of
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cement
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the cement
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manufacturing process for producing concrete as the end product.
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,
cement
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production can be accomplished by using a mixture of limestone and clay that
undergone
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5 crafting processes,
then
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mixing the
cement
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with 4 other substances in a concrete mixer, the result of which is concrete. To produce
cement
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, limestone and clay need to be crushed altogether using a crusher to form powder,
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combined with the mixer. The powder was, after that, put into a rotating heater tube with the heat pointing
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of the outlet.
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the mixture was
grinded
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ground
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again to get the
cement
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.
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, the final product was packed in the bag. After getting
cement
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, to produce concrete, it needs 15% of it, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and 50% of small stones, pour all 4 ingredients together and mix them using the concrete mixture,
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, it is now ready to use.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crushed powder
  • Rotating heater
  • Grinding
  • Mixer
  • Furnace
  • Packaging
  • Proportion
  • Gravel
  • Rotating concrete mixer
  • Raw materials
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