The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should  * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The
bar
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chart
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illustrates the existing
health
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expenses as a percentage of
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the Gross
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Domestic Product (
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) of several European
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for three different years 2002, 2007 and 2012. In the
bar
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chart
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, there are 12 European
countries
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against which
health
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expenditures are provided as percentages of
GDP
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for three consecutive time periods that are 2002, 2007 and 2012. Some European
countries
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have the same amount of spending on
health
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in all three years
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in some
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,
health
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expenditure
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increased or decreased from 2002 to 2012 as percentages of
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. The
bar
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chart
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reflects that Belgium, Estonia, Spain and Switzerland are the
countries
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which have constant
health
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expenditures as
percentage
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a percentage
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of
GDP
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throughout the time period with 10%, 3%, 8% and 11%.
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, the
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chart
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also
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depicts that there are some
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against which
health
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expenses fluctuate in the
year
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years
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2002, 2007 and 2012. Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia are the
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in which
health
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expenditures as
percentage
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a percentage
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of
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are more in the year 2012 in comparison with the years 2007 and 2002
while
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other
nations
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such
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as France,
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Luxembourg
and Netherlands have
less
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health
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expenses as percentages of
GDP
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in the year 2012 in relation to 2007 and 2002
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bar, chart, health, gdp, nations, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • Percentage increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Fluctuation
  • Economic factors
  • Healthcare priorities
  • Public spending
  • Comparative analysis
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