The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the

years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The two graphs
depicts
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the number of export
figures
from
Australia
and
Japan
to New
Zealand
over the decade of 1994-2004.  
Overall
, New
Zealand
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Zealand's
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imported goods from
Australia
was
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were
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initially
much higher than those from
Japan
. Despite both
figures
fluctuated
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during the 10-year period, the New
Zealand
imports from
Japan
dipped to the lowest
at the end
while
those from
Australia
rose to the highest level.   In 1994, New
Zealand
Imported more goods from
Australia
than those from
Japan
, which
was
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were
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4000
million
and 3000
million
, respectively. The New
Zealand
import
figures
from
Australia
witnessed the first peak at approximately 6500
million
in 1996,
while
this
was 6200
million
from
Japan
in 1997.  Despite the import
goods
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of goods
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from
Australia
decreased
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decreasing
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to the lowest of 3000
miliion
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million
in 1999 , before soaring dramatically to the point of approximately 7500
million
,
this
sharply fell to 5000
million
in 2002
then
rose to the highest in the final year of 8000
million
.
Although
there was a fluctuation
of
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the
imort
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import
figures
from
Japan
between 1997 and 2000,
this
dropped to the lowest point of 2000
million
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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