The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line graphs depict the import data of goods from Australia and Japan to New Zealand over a 10-year period, beginning in 1994.
Overall
, both trends show fluctuations, with Australian
imports
increasing while
Japanese imports
experienced a slight decline.
Initially
, in 1994, Australian
imports
to New Zealand began at 4,000 million
NZ
$. By 1996, this
figure sharply rose to approximately 6,500 million
NZ
$. However
, between 1996 and 1998, there were minor fluctuations in the import numbers. Subsequently
, in 1999, Australian
imports
hit a low point at 3,000 million
NZ
$. From 2000 to 2003, there was a significant fluctuation until reaching a peak of approximately 8,000 million
NZ
$ in 2004.
Conversely
, Japanese imports
started at a lower point compared to Australian
imports
, beginning at 3,000 million
NZ
$. Thereafter
, they increased sharply to just under 6,500 million
NZ
$ by 1997. However
, there was a fluctuation in the numbers for a four-year period. After 2001, Japanese imports
slightly decreased, reaching 2,000 million
NZ
$ by the end of the period.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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