The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two line graphs depict the import data of goods from Australia and Japan to New Zealand over a 10-year period, beginning in 1994.
Overall
, both trends show fluctuations, with
Australian
imports
increasing
while
Japanese
imports
experienced a slight decline.
Initially
, in 1994,
Australian
imports
to New Zealand began at 4,000
million
NZ
$. By 1996,
this
figure sharply rose to approximately 6,500
million
NZ
$.
However
, between 1996 and 1998, there were minor fluctuations in the import numbers.
Subsequently
, in 1999,
Australian
imports
hit a low point at 3,000
million
NZ
$. From 2000 to 2003, there was a significant fluctuation until reaching a peak of approximately 8,000
million
NZ
$ in 2004.
Conversely
, Japanese
imports
started at a lower point compared to
Australian
imports
, beginning at 3,000
million
NZ
$.
Thereafter
, they increased sharply to just under 6,500
million
NZ
$ by 1997.
However
, there was a fluctuation in the numbers for a four-year period. After 2001, Japanese
imports
slightly decreased, reaching 2,000
million
NZ
$ by the end of the period.
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  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
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  • spiked
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