A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
think that high
wage is Correct article usage
a high
an
essential Change the article
apply
than
Change preposition
to
job
satisfaction for every employees
, Change to a singular noun
employee
while
others argue that person
cannot Correct article usage
a person
work
in profession
which do not want Add an article
a profession
this
job
. This
essay will be discussed in
both Change preposition
from
point
of view.
On the one hand, a high Change to a plural noun
points
salary
covers personal and family needs and brings happiness than work
enjoyment. To be more specific, if people
work
in low paid
jobs, they cannot Add a hyphen
low-paid
happy
long-lasting, and Add a missing verb
be happy
this
leads to many issues for people
, such
as individuals can be stressed due to
lack of not having enough money. For example
, if humans make more capital in your
employment, they can buy whatever Correct pronoun usage
their
your
family needs and pay all of their monthly bills. Correct pronoun usage
their
Therefore
, when people
choose the type of employment, the amount of wage should be considered.
On the other hand
, although
the majority of people
prefer the high salary
job
, it is important that they are pleasure
with their career. Employees are Replace the word
pleased
boring
and Replace the word
bored
are
not Verb problem
do
enjoyment of
their Wrong verb form
enjoy
work
, despite of they have high wage
. Fix the agreement mistake
wages
In other words
, people
should work
in job
that Add an article
a job
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
benefit
both Correct subject-verb agreement
benefits
own
and Correct pronoun usage
their own
community
. Correct article usage
the community
Thus
, when individuals choose to job
, they should be focused on their career.
In conclusion, although
, salary
is vital for human’s lives, also
job
satisfaction play
Correct subject-verb agreement
plays
Correct article usage
a significantly
significantly
role in Change the adverb
significant
future
career Correct pronoun usage
their future
of
Change preposition
apply
them
. I believe that these are important for human’s Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
life both high salary
and job
satisfaction, and people
should decide after reviewing these points.Submitted by quluzadenurlan107 on
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