A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
think that
high
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a high
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wage is
an
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apply
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essential
than
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to
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job
satisfaction for every
employees
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employee
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,
while
others argue that
person
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a person
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cannot
work
in
profession
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a profession
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which do not want
this
job
.
This
essay will be discussed
in
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both
point
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of view. On the one hand, a high
salary
covers personal and family needs and brings happiness than
work
enjoyment. To be more specific, if
people
work
in
low paid
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low-paid
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jobs, they cannot
happy
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be happy
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long-lasting, and
this
leads to many issues for
people
,
such
as individuals can be stressed
due to
lack of not having enough money.
For example
, if humans make more capital in
your
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their
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employment, they can buy whatever
your
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their
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family needs and pay all of their monthly bills.
Therefore
, when
people
choose the type of employment, the amount of wage should be considered.
On the other hand
,
although
the majority of
people
prefer the high
salary
job
, it is important that they are
pleasure
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pleased
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with their career. Employees are
boring
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bored
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and
are
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do
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not
enjoyment of
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enjoy
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their
work
, despite of they have high
wage
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wages
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.
In other words
,
people
should
work
in
job
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a job
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that
they
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apply
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benefit
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benefits
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both
own
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their own
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and
community
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the community
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.
Thus
, when individuals choose to
job
, they should be focused on their career. In conclusion,
although
,
salary
is vital for human’s lives,
also
job
satisfaction
play
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plays
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a significantly
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significantly
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significant
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role in
future
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their future
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career
of
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them
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apply
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. I believe that these are important for human’s
work
life both high
salary
and
job
satisfaction, and
people
should decide after reviewing these points.
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