The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first illustration shows total global
energy
consumption, Use synonyms
while
the second one depicts the total world Linking Words
electricity
generation from the Use synonyms
last
year.
As a whole, the data from both of these pie charts are quite similar, Linking Words
Also
, it is worth mentioning that only oil and gas are considered as fossil fuels, other sources of Linking Words
energy
from the pie charts are not.
Total world Use synonyms
energy
consumption of oil is the largest it made up 34.3% of the chart, Use synonyms
although
oil generated fairly Linking Words
small
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little
energy
at 6.7% of all the generated Use synonyms
electricity
. 40% of generated Use synonyms
electricity
was from coal, Use synonyms
however
, only a quarter of Linking Words
energy
consumption was from coal. Combustible renewables and waste didn't generate any Use synonyms
electricity
at all, Use synonyms
although
it did consume 10.6% of all Linking Words
energy
consumed. The amount of consumed and generated gas was quite similar, both of them were approximately 20%. Hydro and nuclear Use synonyms
energy
consumed quite little amount of Use synonyms
energy
2.2% and 6.5%, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, it generated way more Linking Words
energy
, hydro produced 16.1% of all the generated Use synonyms
energy
, Use synonyms
while
nuclear produced 15.7% of all the produced Linking Words
energy
.Use synonyms
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