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The line graph shows the price of banana in Japan, France, Germany, and the USA from 1994 to 2004.

The line graph shows the price of banana in Japan, France, Germany, and the USA from 1994 to 2004.
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As can be
seen
Add a comma
seen,
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 the line graph shows the different countries as Japan , France , Germany and
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
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 . It can be seen the difference between 1994 to 2004 , for
Banana
prices
of
Change preposition
in
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 kilograms .
Overall
, in Japan,
Banana
prices
 increased sharply from
Banana
prices
 in 1995 .
On the other hand
 , after 6 years the
prices
 of
bananas
 had declined substantially
as
Change preposition
apply
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per 1.5 kilograms .
Secondly
 , In France ,
Banana
prices
 had an alternative slowly and
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
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 reached a peak in 2004 .
Thirdly
 , Germany saw a decrease of 1.50 per kilogram .
Finally
, In
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
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 the
prices
 of
Bananas
 had remained stable at the same level of 1.00 .
In the
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The
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 line graph
given
Wrong verb form
gives
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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information
of
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about
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 a
difference
Replace the word
different
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 period in the countries
as well
as
Correct word choice
apply
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, the
prices
 of
kilograms's
Change preposition
kilograms of
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bananas
 were not changed only in Japan has a lot of change
on
Change preposition
in
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 the level of
Bananas
Fix the agreement mistake
banana
show examples
prices
 .
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words banana, prices, bananas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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