The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the statistics on goods exported from Australia to four different countries in a 22-year period, starting from 1990.
Overall
, it is apparent that Australian export
with Japan and the US experienced a downward trend, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
while
the export
to China and India witnessed Fix the agreement mistake
exports
a
considerable growth.
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Initially
, in 1990, the
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export
to Japan and America commenced at higher levels, with well over 10% and 25% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Japan
percentage decreased sharply to 20% in 1995. After that, it continued to drop gradually and finished at roughly 18%. Change noun form
Japan's
On the other hand
, the US number fell and rose over a decade, then
dropped to its lowest point in
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grow
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growing
slighly
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slightly
at the end
of the period.
Conversely
, China and India began with lower numbers, just under 5%. While
the export
to India increased slightly, peaking at nearly 8% in 2010, and Fix the agreement mistake
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drop
minimally, China's fraction Wrong verb form
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rocketted
throughout the period, reaching its peak at 30%, surpassing other countries, securing the largest percentage.Correct your spelling
rocketed
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