The bar chart illustrates the proportion of both male and female people in six different age groups in Australia doing regular physical activity in 2010. The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below
show
the Change the verb form
shows
percentage
of Australian men and women in different age
groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart demonstrates the percentage
range among genders from six different age
groups in Australia doing regular physical activity in 2010.
Generally, the graph illustrates that, from their 25’s, women got the highest percentages on
exercising .
Change preposition
of
Firstly
, 15
to 24, Change preposition
from 15
men’s
Correct article usage
the men’s
group
are
got higher percentages than Unnecessary verb
apply
women’s
Correct article usage
the women’s
group
with a little bit difference
. Change preposition
of difference
However
, later, percentage
of the Correct article usage
the percentage
women’s
band
starts to increase. In their 25 women’s
group
got 48.9% which is higher percentages
than men’s. Later, male athletes still decrease in the Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
age
of 35-44 to the percentage
of 39.5. In
the Change preposition
From
age
of 45 till 54 women’s
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the women’s
band
got the pick point on the graph with 53.3% while
the percentage
in male
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the male
band
started to go up little by little. Additionally
, in the next age
group
, dropped their superiority with the
decline of 0.3%. After, the Correct article usage
a
percentage
in women’s
Correct article usage
the women’s
band
go
down a bit more, Wrong verb form
went
nevertheless
, Correct article usage
the males
males
Fix the agreement mistake
male
group
increased more than before. Despite that, at the age
of 65 and over females got higher point
than males with just 0.4%.Fix the agreement mistake
points
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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