The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts compare
energy
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production
in terms of five important categories in 1995 and 2005.
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Overall
, it's clear that the highest proportion of Linking Words
energy
was coal, gas and petrol Use synonyms
production
. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the lowest proportions were nuclear and other energies.
In 1995 and 2005 the greatest source of Linking Words
energy
was coal at 29,80% and 30,93%, respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the proportion of gas Linking Words
energy
was 29,63% in 1995, Use synonyms
while
in 2005 Linking Words
this
was 30,31%. Regarding to Linking Words
energy
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production
of petrol , the figure was 29,21% in 1995. Use synonyms
However
, it was 19,55% in 2005. Linking Words
While
, the Linking Words
production
of nuclear Use synonyms
energy
was 6,40% in 1995, in 2005 it was 10,10%. The lowest proportion of Use synonyms
production
was other energies at 4,90% and 9,10% in both years.Use synonyms
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