The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts compare
energy
production
in terms of five important categories in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, it's clear that the highest proportion of energy
was coal, gas and petrol production
. Whereas
, the lowest proportions were nuclear and other energies.
In 1995 and 2005 the greatest source of energy
was coal at 29,80% and 30,93%, respectively. Moreover
, the proportion of gas energy
was 29,63% in 1995, while
in 2005 this
was 30,31%. Regarding to energy
production
of petrol , the figure was 29,21% in 1995. However
, it was 19,55% in 2005. While
, the production
of nuclear energy
was 6,40% in 1995, in 2005 it was 10,10%. The lowest proportion of production
was other energies at 4,90% and 9,10% in both years.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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