The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Hydroelectric dam

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diagrams depict how electricity is generated by water.

Overall

, it is a complex

process

which includes three main stages of

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the natrual

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natrual

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natural

process

and six steps of

mechanical

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the mechanical

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process

. Once the water in the sea receives the heat from the sun, it starts to evaporate.

Next,

the evaporation

condensses

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condenses

and transforms

to

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the

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apply

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clouds and

then

turn

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to

the

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rain after it

is cooling

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cools

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down. When the rain falls down, the raindrops will be reserved in the area surrounded by the dam.

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will be the starting point where power gets generated. A cyclical

process

starting from the

reservior

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reservoir

followed

with

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the valve, the turbine and the pump enables the water to flow and eventually be pumped back to the

reservior

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reservoir

. During the

process

, power is generated and sent from the

turbin

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turbine

to the high voltage cables.

Next,

the power goes through the cables to the transformer station where the

electrocity

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electricity

is transformed and

transitted

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transmitted

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through the underground cables to the destinations

such

as hospitals and schools.