The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
The graph compares the
amount
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of foreign
asquisitions
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acquisitions
acquisition
which came from AUS and Japan to New Zealand
during
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between
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1994 and 2004.
Overall
, the figures for the two countries showed different trends.
While
the number of incoming goods from Australia fluctuated frequently, the figures from Japan remained relatively stable. As the chart reveals, Australia's point started with $4,000
million
in early 1994. After one year, it increased gradually to around $6.500
million
in 1995.Until 1998,
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fell over $5.5
million
,
then
plunged significantly to $3
million
in 1999, but
then
quickly reached a peak with approximately $7.5
million
between 2000 and 2001. The digit went down to about $5.5
million
in 2009. Afterwards, the figure showed considerable growth to $8.0
million
in 2004.Regarding Japan, in 1995, they shipped roughly $3.000
million
of overseas procurement to NZL.
This
quantity
rised
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raised
risen
rose
steadily to nearly $6.1
million
in 1997.
Following
this
, it decreased sharply to below $4,100
million
in 1999, but contrast gave considerable growth to $6.1
million
in 2001.
Thereafter
,
subsequently
plunged to nearly $2.0
million
in 2003 and 2004 respectively.
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