WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs provided illustrate the number of imports
taken
place from two Wrong verb form
taking
diffrenet
countries (Correct your spelling
different
Australia
and Japan
) toward New Zealand
from 1994 to 2004. Unit
used was NZ$ million.
Add an article
The unit
A unit
Overall
, it can be seen that the import
to Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Australia
started at 4000 while
,
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apply
japan
's Fix the agreement mistake
imports
import
started at 3000. Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Australia
's import
to New Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Zealand
was
higher during 2004 compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Japan
's (8000 and 2000 respectively).
In terms of New Zealand
's imports from Australia
, it
Correct pronoun usage
they
stared
to increase gradually over Correct your spelling
started
ywo
years Correct your spelling
two
then
followed by a downward trend reaching 3000 during 1999. Furthermore
, it again showed an upward trend approximately
7400. Change preposition
of approximately
Then
for the last
2 years
it fluctuated.
With regard to New Add a comma
years,
Zealand
's imports from Japan
, during the period from 1994 until 1997
it showed a rise of almost double what it was. Add a comma
1997,
Then
slightly decreaseing in 1999. Finally
, it rised
to exactly 6000 in 2000. Correct your spelling
raised
rose
Then
it showed a steedy
constant decrease as it reached Correct your spelling
steady
to
2000 in 2004.Change preposition
apply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, zealand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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