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he table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses they live in 3 areas of a city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses they live in 3 areas of a city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the number of residents in three different areas and the percentages they reside in four types of housing.
Overall
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apartment
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 in
green
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the green
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park
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area
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 is the highest proportion followed by terraced in
Southberg
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the Southberg
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area
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are
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area
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 and detached in
central
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the central
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area
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. Meanwhile, semi-detached is the least both in
green
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Green Park
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park
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 and Southberg areas.
Central
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The central
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area
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 is the most populous residential with 32,100 population. Most of them live in detached housing at 39%.
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, it is followed by semi-detached houses at 28%. Terraced and
apartment
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,
on the other hand
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, accounted for 18% and 15% respectively. Green
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park
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Park
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area
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 is resided by 31,700 population where around
three fourths
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three-fourths
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 of them live in
flat
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flats
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/
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apartment
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apartments
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, the highest percentage compared to others. It is followed by terraced at 14%.
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, just 5% for both semi-detached and detached housing in
this
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area
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.
Southberg
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Southern
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park
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Park
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area
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 is populated
with
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by
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 32,000 people. In decreasing order, it is started with terrace at 56%,
apartment
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 at 25%, detached at 14% and semi-detached at 5%.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words apartment, park, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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