The charts below show the percentage of males and females who worked in three different sectors in two countries in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the number of each worker's shares, in 2007, based on their genders in different parts of the two countries.
Overall
, it can be seen that the service
industry
was the most popular section
among two other sections in both countries. Also
, in country
B
, nearly all of the employees whether they were men or women, worked in this
section
.
First of all, more than half of the proportion of male workers
worked in the service
sector in both countries A and B
with 54% and 65% respectively. Although
employees who worked in the industry
had the second share with more than one-third in country
B
, in country
A, the industry
's workers
with only 15% were the lowest amount in comparison to the other parts. Furthermore
, the agriculture section
in country
B
with a minor share, of about 3% which was a quarter lower than the same share in country
A, was the least interesting section
.
Second of all, nearly all of the female workers
in country
B
were passionate about working in the service
sections, with less than 90%. However
, the agriculture section
like male workers
in this
country
had the lowest amount of interest among female workers
with only a per cent. However
, in country
, A the service
section
and the agricultural part had similar proportions, 49% and 43% respectively which means more than 90% of the female workers
were occupied in these sections. Also
, the industry
section
in this
country
like the male workers
, was the lowest with only less than one ten per cent in total.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, industry, section, country, b, workers with synonyms.
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