The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie graphs provide data on the
comparsion
of five different types of Correct your spelling
comparison
energy
produce
in France from 1995 to 2005.
Wrong verb form
produced
Overall
, it is clear that
coal is the main energy
resource throughout the given period. It is also
worth pointing out that petro
showed an opposing trend compared with other Change the capitalization
Petro
energy
productions.
Looking at the charts in more detail, coal took up the biggest part at 29.80% in 1995, followed by gas, petro
, nuclear, and Correct your spelling
petrol
other
at 29.63%, 29.27%, 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. After Fix the agreement mistake
others
then
, coal still remained the biggest sector and the figure for Correct your spelling
that
this
energy
production increased slightly by around 1% to 30.93% in 2005. Moreover
, gas experienced minimal growth as well from 29.63% to 30.31% between 1995 and 2005. Even though both energy
productions went up gradually, the sectors
ranking did not change for a decade.
Change noun form
sector's
sectors'
In contrast
, petro only had significant
Correct article usage
a significant
decreased
of roughly 10% from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005. Despite nuclear and other Replace the word
decrease
energy
productions made
up Wrong verb form
making
merly
6.40% and 4.90% Correct your spelling
mainly
repectively
in 1995, both Correct your spelling
respectively
energy
production portions grew up considerly
to 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005.Correct your spelling
considerably
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