The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie graphs provide data on the

comparsion

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comparison

of five different types of

energy

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produce

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produced

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in France from 1995 to 2005.

Overall

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it is clear that

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coal is the main

energy

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resource throughout the given period. It is

also

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worth pointing out that

petro

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Petro

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showed an opposing trend compared with other

energy

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productions. Looking at the charts in more detail, coal took up the biggest part at 29.80% in 1995, followed by gas,

petro

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petrol

, nuclear, and

other

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others

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at 29.63%, 29.27%, 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. After

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then

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that

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, coal still remained the biggest sector and the figure for

this

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energy

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production increased slightly by around 1% to 30.93% in 2005.

Moreover

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, gas experienced minimal growth as well from 29.63% to 30.31% between 1995 and 2005. Even though both

energy

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productions went up gradually, the

sectors

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sector's

sectors'

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ranking did not change for a decade.

In contrast

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, petro only had

significant

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a significant

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decreased

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of roughly 10% from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005. Despite nuclear and other

energy

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productions

made

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making

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merly

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mainly

6.40% and 4.90%

repectively

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respectively

in 1995, both

energy

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production portions grew up

considerly

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considerably

to 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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