The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie graphs provide data on the
comparsion
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comparison
of five different types of
energy
produce
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produced
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in France from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
coal is the main
energy
resource throughout the given period. It is
also
worth pointing out that
petro
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Petro
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showed an opposing trend compared with other
energy
productions. Looking at the charts in more detail, coal took up the biggest part at 29.80% in 1995, followed by gas,
petro
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petrol
, nuclear, and
other
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others
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at 29.63%, 29.27%, 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. After
then
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that
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, coal still remained the biggest sector and the figure for
this
energy
production increased slightly by around 1% to 30.93% in 2005.
Moreover
, gas experienced minimal growth as well from 29.63% to 30.31% between 1995 and 2005. Even though both
energy
productions went up gradually, the
sectors
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sector's
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ranking did not change for a decade.
In contrast
, petro only had
significant
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decreased
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of roughly 10% from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005. Despite nuclear and other
energy
productions
made
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making
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up
merly
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mainly
6.40% and 4.90%
repectively
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respectively
in 1995, both
energy
production portions grew up
considerly
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considerably
to 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005.
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