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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the distribution of
energy
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production
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 in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, it can be observed that coal was the primary source of
energy
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 in both years, with a slightly lower proportion of gas
production
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.
Furthermore
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, the remaining
energy
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 resources accounted for the smallest shares among the five types of power generation. In 1995, coal, gas, and petroleum dominated the pie chart, representing approximately 29.80%, 29.63%, and 29.27% respectively. Nuclear power and other
energy
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 sources comprised the remaining portion of the chart, combining to make up nearly 10%. Moving to 2005, coal and gas
production
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 still held the highest shares,
although
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 petroleum experienced a decline of one-tenth and reached nearly one-fifth of the total.
Conversely
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, nuclear power and other
energy
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 sources witnessed an increase in
production
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, accounting for 10% and 9.10% respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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