The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart depicts the comparison of
energy
production
during a specific period .It is clear from the graph that gas had the largest value of Energy
production
, whereas
the other material contributed the lowest compared to other kinds of energy
production
. According to
what is shown Coal had the most significant amount of power production
29 %in 1995 and 30 % in 2005 .Following that, gas production
was at 29.63 which later increased to 30 %in 2005 .In contrast
,petroleum material made up 29.7 %in 1995 then
declined to 19.55 % in 2005 .
It can be seen that the ratio of nuclear production
in 1995 was 6.40 % which eventually grew to 10 %in 2005 and other materials was at 4.90 % in 1995 then
reached 9.10 % in 2005 . To sum up
we could say that ،gas and Coal covered the highest percentage of energy
production
compared to other sourcesSubmitted by aldossaryfaten95 on
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