The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14 to 16 - year old students studying a foreign language in an English spoken country and the top 3 foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These bar graphs illustrate the ratio of 14 to 16-year-old
students
learning a foreign language in an Use synonyms
English-spoken
country and the three most commonly used foreign Correct your spelling
English-speaking
languages
. In general, female Use synonyms
students
showed more interest in learning new Use synonyms
languages
than male Use synonyms
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in 1984 and in 2007. Use synonyms
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, French is the most popular language amongst others.
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genders showed a reduced percentage of learning a foreign language in 2007 than in 1984 but the gap is almost the same. Among the three top Use synonyms
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, French remained the first place in Use synonyms
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1984 and 2007, but the proportion dropped drastically from 50% to 25%, respectively. Use synonyms
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German showed a modest decrease from 20% to 15%, Spanish showed doubled results from 5% to 10% over 23 years.
In conclusion, the graphs show that fewer Linking Words
students
learned foreign Use synonyms
languages
in 2007 than in 1984, Use synonyms
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the girls were more enthusiastic than the boys in Linking Words
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periods. Use synonyms
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, French was the most popular among the three but Spanish turned out to be more popular than in the past.Linking Words
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