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Most people take interviews to select a person for job. What are the other ways? What do you think is the best way to recruit new employees.

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The
candidate
 selection process is based on the performance in the interviews held by employers at a majority of workplaces. There are a plethora of other methods to hire employees. One way is through the reference system and the other way is by testing the
candidate
. I believe examining
candidate's
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 abilities and knowledge is more important.
To begin
 with, some employers hire individuals based on the references they provide. It helps them to verify
background
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 of the
person
through
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 checking with the internal worker who has provided the reference of that
candidate
.
Also
, it is the best method to know the character of the individual. Now, if the whole verification process goes well, it allows the employer to find a trustworthy
person
 for the role. To exemplify, many companies do not want their confidential information to get leaked. They tend to avoid unknown people from getting hired and they follow the leads offered by the present workers who have already established their honesty in the organization. So, if that
person
 brings someone to the workplace
then
 he is absolutely
welcomed
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.
Furthermore
, it is highly crucial to test the ability of a
person
 whom
they
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an employer is considering for the job. Some jobs need specific skills to perform
such
 kinds of roles efficiently.
For example
, In India, the government use competitive examination
technique
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 to recruit capable people from millions who are taking
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the test
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test
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. To pass
such
 kinds of exams is a daunting task for many. It
also
 shows the test-taker's ability to handle the responsibilities and pressures related to the job. In conclusion, if security is more important to an organization
then
 the reference system works appropriately.
However
, to filter a few from millions of people applying for the job
then
 competitive exams are the best method. From my perspective, it is important to check the aptitude of an individual by conducting a test.
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Try to focus on a more balanced discussion of alternative methods for recruiting employees. Exploring different methods in more depth can help strengthen your argument.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Assessment Centers
  • Simulate
  • Task-based evaluation
  • Psychometric tests
  • Aptitude
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Reference checks
  • Background checks
  • Artificial intelligence (AI)
  • Machine learning
  • Screening
  • Internships
  • Temporary contracts
  • Trial period
  • Social media screening
  • Professional network
  • Portfolio reviews
  • Peer-group interviews
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Case studies
  • Analytical abilities
  • Decision-making skills
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