Writing Task 1 (Pie. The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 39% 19% 48% 13% 71% 53% North America South America Europe Africa 84% 32% 15% Central Asia South East Asia Industrial Use Agricultural Use 100% + Domestic Use
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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of
water
consumption for several purposes compared with six different countries across the world.
Overall
, it can be seen apparently that the highest water
used is agricultural use
in all nations, except North America
and Europe. Whereas
the lowest common purpose is domestic use
, besides
Africa and South America
.
According to
the graph, North America
uses water
for industrial use
the most, accounting for 48%, followed by agricultural and domestic aspects, which made up 39% and 18%, respectively. Similarly
, European people consume water
significantly for industrial objectives, 53%, and then
farming and household use
rank second and third,
constituting 32% and 15% order. In contrast
, there are 71% of people in South America
use
water
in an area of agriculture and a moderate range in the other areas, which occupy 10%-19%.
Furthermore
, the number of African
Fix the agreement mistake
Africans
consume
Correct pronoun usage
who consume
water
for farming contributes 84%, however
, there were around 7%-9% in the other two aspects. Central Asia has 88% in planting perspective, while
there was a similar figure in factory and residence used, being 5% to 7% in range. Lastly
, the largest segment of water
consumption in South East Asia is also
a purpose of agriculture, which is responsible for 81%, followed by factory and dweller consumption, occupying 12% and 7%, respectively.Submitted by saiparnwc on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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