The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph displays information about the workforce in
Australia
based on their origin of birth in 2003, and the line graph illustrates the number of people who are not working depending on their place of birth between 1993 and 2003.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest number of workers were born in
Australia
.
While
the majority of unemployed were born in non-speaking
countries
other than
Australia
.
According to
the pie chart, in 2003, 10% of employees were born in
Australia
,
whereas
10% were born in non-speaking
countries
other than
Australia
.
However
, the place of birth for 14% of workers was in English-speaking
countries
.
Furthermore
, in 1993, around 7% of people who did not work in
Australia
were originally from non-speaking
countries
other than
Australia
, the percentage witnessed a decrease of around 3% , in 1998, after that, it had a fluctuation in numbers until 2003 to back again about 3%. Unemployment in
Australia
was 4% in 1993, but the numbers experienced a decrease to reach 2% in 2003. People who did not work from English-Speaking
countries
were almost 4%, in 1993, which dropped dramatically to around 1% in 2003.
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