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the pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

the pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of
power
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 which was made by diverse ranges of
energy
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 in France between 1995 and 2005 In general, most of the
energy
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 saw an upward trend with the exception of Petrol.
Additionally
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,gas and coal were seen to be the most popular
energy
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 that the French applied
it
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to create
power
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 throughout the timeframe. Looking at the two main
energy
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 sources in the pie chart, in
further
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 detail, coal accounted for 29.80% before slightly going up to 30,93% in 2005.
Similarly
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, the figure of gas stood at 29,63% in the first researched year and saw a minor increase to about 30,31%
at the end
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 of the timeline. Turning to the remaining producing
energy
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, it could be seen that petrol was the sole
energy
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 source that saw a drop from 29,27% to 19,55% after ten years.
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, the
power
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 manufactured from nuclear
power
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 and other sources climbed up by approximately 5% to over 10% and 9% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, energy with synonyms.
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