The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphics show the data on
water
applications for various purposes in six areas
of the world.
Overall
, the way water
is being used in North America
and Europe seems similar, which applies to a majority of industries, while
the least is used in households. In addition
, it is evident that other areas
consume a high proportion of water
, over half of it in agriculture.
To begin
with, water
used in industry accounts for 48% and 53% of the consumption in North America
and Europe, respectively. However
, agricultural development is also
vital to these areas
, where water
used in the field accounts for over a quarter. As for domestic consumption, are both less than 20%.
Regarding the rest of the areas
, water
is used in a similar proportion, which emphasizes agricultural development, which accounts for over 80% except for South America
. The proportion of domestic use in South America
is double that in the other three areas
, while
agricultural consumption shows 71%.Submitted by vsunnloe147 on
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