the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
pie charts bellow demonstrate the proportion of used
water
for various purposes in six different regions all around the world.
Overall
,it is noticeable that domestic
usage
is lower than the other two mentioned purposes.two different patterns are shown in the charts,in the first one farming and planting take the majority
while
in the second one factories.
According to
charts,in Europe and North
America
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industries demand almost half of existed
water
,
also
domestic
usage
of
water
in these two areas like others contains the lowest percentage.
On the other hand
, patterns for the other four lands are approximately the same and the only difference is in the percentage of domestic and industrial
usage
. in southeast
Asia
,central
Asia
and Africa more than 80 % of
water
is for farming . in
the
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south-east
Asia
and central
Asia
, houses consume less
water
in comparison with other mentioned regions with just 7 % of
water
usage
.
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