The line chart shows global population trends as a percentage from 1950 to 2040. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.

The given line graph illustrates the percentage of the

population

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in urban and rural areas in the world within a

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of 90

years-commencing

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from 1950

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the other line graph shows the percentage of the

population

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based on age within a

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of 90 years since 1950.

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,the highest rate of the

population

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can be observed in urban areas in 2040

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the highest number of

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based on age can be seen in 15-65 years in 2040 and

this

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group have a move upward trend during the

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. At the beginning of the

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, the rate of rural and urban was the same amount at just nearly 5

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this

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number was just over 10

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total. urban and total increased moderately to get to 38 and 40 respectively

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period

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rural keeps the same trend to

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well under 10.

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the age diagram,at the beginning of the

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, all categories have the same amount around 5%

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this

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number keeps fluctuating to get 35

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of the

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for 15-65 years

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the other two categories keep the same trend to finish at 5.