The line chart shows global population trends as a percentage from 1950 to 2040. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of the
population
in urban and rural areas in the world within a period
of 90 years-commencing
from 1950 Correct your spelling
years commencing
while
the other line graph shows the percentage of the population
based on age within a period
of 90 years since 1950.
overall
,the highest rate of the population
can be observed in urban areas in 2040 whereas
the highest number of population
based on age can be seen in 15-65 years in 2040 and this
group have a move upward trend during the period
.
At the beginning of the period
, the rate of rural and urban was the same amount at just nearly 5 while
this
number was just over 10 for
total. urban and total increased moderately to get to 38 and 40 respectively Change preposition
in
at the end
of period
Correct article usage
the period
while
rural keeps the same trend to finished
well under 10.
Wrong verb form
finish
according to
the age diagram,at the beginning of the period
, all categories have the same amount around 5% then
this
number keeps fluctuating to get 35 at the end
of the period
for 15-65 years whereas
the other two categories keep the same trend to finish at 5.Submitted by salehmiri1995 on
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