The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph displays the
percentages
of Canadian workers
in manufacturing, services
, construction, and energy
/ water
in the years 1850 and 2020.
Overall
, in 1850 there were more people working in different activities like Manufacturing, services
and agriculture. In 2020 services
had the highest percentage of workers
being the industry that grew in 2020. Energy
/Water
had the lowest percentages
of the workforce in both years.
In 1850 manufacturing, services
and agriculture were the most important industries with 36%,33% and 22% of the workforce respectively. The percentages
of people working in Construction and Energy
/water
were the activities with fewer workers
5% and 3% respectively.
In 2020 the industry of services
was the most important with 81 % of the workforce. Manufacturing and Agriculture dramatically dropped in comparison with 1850 (36% vs 9% and 22% vs 1%). The percentages
of workers
in Construction and Energy
/Water
were not relevant compared 1850
and 2020 Change preposition
to 1850
due to
the numbers remaining year on year.Submitted by daniruspi on
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