Task 1: The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The chart below illustrates the
proportion
of individuals who ate five sections of fruits and vegetables for
each day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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apply
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of people who eating
fruits and Change the form of the verb
eat
vegetable
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vegetables
was
women, Wrong verb form
are
while
, the opposite was
true for children. Wrong verb form
is
Additionally
, the percentage
of eating them increased in
each year.
Examining for Change preposition
apply
further
detail, the proportion
of women who eating
fruit and Wrong verb form
ate
vegetable
each day in 2006 was the highest, by over 30%. In 2001, it was 20%, which is lower than the Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
percentage
in 2002, by 5%. From 2002 to 2005, the percentage
went up gradually by 5% for each year and reached to
30% in 2005. In 2007, it Change preposition
apply
has
decreased to 30%, which was similar to the Unnecessary verb
apply
percentage
in 2005 as well as
higher than the proportion
in 2008, by 3%.
Turning back to the remaining statistic, regard to
the Correct your spelling
regarding
proportion
of men who ate fruit and vegetables for
each day, from 2001 to 2003, it remained at the same Change preposition
apply
percentage
, by 17%, then
continued to rose
slightlyWrong verb form
rise
2
% Change preposition
by 2
for
each year and Change preposition
apply
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
to
over 20% in 2006. From 2006 to 2008, the Change preposition
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proportion
stayed at the same percentage
. Moving on to the percentage
of children, the trend was similar to men as the proportion
of children ate
fruit and vegetables remained at 10% from 2001 to 2003, Correct pronoun usage
who ate
then
had
went up to over 20% for 3 years. Since 2006, the Unnecessary verb
apply
percentage
had increased slightly about 3%, then
continued to fell
Wrong verb form
fall
down
which Change preposition
apply
was
resembled Unnecessary verb
apply
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
proportion
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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