The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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of individuals who ate five sections of fruits and vegetables

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each day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the majority of people who

eating

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fruits and

vegetable

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women,

while

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, the opposite

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true for children.

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, the

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of eating them increased

in

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each year. Examining for

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detail, the

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of women who

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fruit and

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each day in 2006 was the highest, by over 30%. In 2001, it was 20%, which is lower than the

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in 2002, by 5%. From 2002 to 2005, the

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went up gradually by 5% for each year and reached

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30% in 2005. In 2007, it

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decreased to 30%, which was similar to the

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in 2005

as well as

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higher than the

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in 2008, by 3%. Turning back to the remaining statistic,

regard to

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the

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of men who ate fruit and vegetables

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each day, from 2001 to 2003, it remained at the same

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, by 17%,

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continued to

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slightly

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%

for

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each year and

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reached

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to

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over 20% in 2006. From 2006 to 2008, the

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stayed at the same

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. Moving on to the

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of children, the trend was similar to men as the

proportion

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of children

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fruit and vegetables remained at 10% from 2001 to 2003,

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went up to over 20% for 3 years. Since 2006, the

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had increased slightly about 3%,

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continued to

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down

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which

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resembled

to

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the

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in 2006.