The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration are a graph and chart illustrating the statistics about three different types of
workers
in 2003 and the unemployment
rate
in those communities between 1993 and 2003.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
workers
born in Australia overwhelmed the two remaining categories of
workers
.
Additionally
, the unemployment
rate
in all categories witnessed a downward trajectory. Beginning with the proportion of three types of
workers
in Australia, where the local ones dominated at 76%.
Subsequently
, there were more
workers
from non-English-speaking countries than English-speaking countries, accounting for 14% and 10%, respectively. Moving on to the unemployment
rate
,
although
experiencing a decreasing trend, NESC always was the highest throughout the timeframe with over 7% in 1993, and
then
declined to around 3% in 2003.
This
was followed by the percentage of
workers
from Australia, it stood at 4%
initially
and decreased by nearly half, reporting 2%
at the end
of the period. In reference to ESC, it took a decrease from approximately 4% to under 1%, making
this
the lowest
rate
in 2003.
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