The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the line graph is information pertaining to the rate of
unemployment
in the EU
, the UK, and Japan between 1933 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the unemployment
rates of the EU
and the UK saw a downward trend while
Japan saw the opposite trend. Additionally
, the EU
's unemployment
rate was the highest at the end
of the timeframe.
Beginning with the EU
, unemployed people accounted for nearly 9% in 1993, then
it saw a gradual increase to more than 11.6% in 1997 before witnessing a decent decline to approximately 7.5% at the end
of the period. With regards to The UK, its rates stood at exactly 11% at the beginning before decreasing significantly to 5% in 2001, then
followed by a plateau until 2005 and bounced back to 6% in 2007.
Turning to the remaining category, Japan's unemployment
rate was exactly 2% in 1993. This
was followed by a significant incline to 6% in 2003 before dropping to 4% in 2007.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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