The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph given depicts the variations in
unemployment
rates across three areas: the UK
, the rest
of Europe
, and Japan
over the course of 14 years, from 1993 to 2007.
It is clear that
the jobless percentage in the UK
followed an upward trend while
the percentages in both the rest
of Europe
and Japan
experienced a reverse pattern, with the latter being consistently the lowest throughout the period.
In 1993, there were merely 2% of Japanese unemployed workers, a quarter of the approximately 8.5% observed in the rest
of the EU. Topping the chart was the UK
with a jobless proportion nearing 12%. Over the following eight-year period from 1993 to 2001, there was stability in Japan
's unemployment
rate after a marginal rise at 3.7% in 1995. Meanwhile, the rest
of Europe
's rate fluctuated noticeably, reaching a peak of 12% in 1997. Conversely
, a precipitous decline of around 6% was witnessed in Great Britain's unemployment
proportion.
In the final six years, the unemployment
proportions in both Japan
and the rest
of Europe
experienced a steady decrease, ending the period at 4% and roughly 8% respectively. In contrast
, the percentage of unemployed people in the UK
plateaued at about 5.8% until 2005, then
rising slightly to 6% at the end
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