The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
first
diagram
illustrates the stages in the life a
silkworm, Change preposition
of a
while
the second
diagram
shows production
of Add an article
the production
silk
cloth.
Overall
, there are four stages in the life cycle of a silkworm from eggs to cocoon
. However
, after
Correct word choice
apply
this
picture has last
step of Change the article
the last
silkworm’s
transformation — Correct article usage
the silkworm’s
moth
. In the Correct article usage
the moth
diagram
lifecycle present
stages until Replace the word
presents
cocoon
, because Correct article usage
the cocoon
first
Change the article
the first
diagram
connects with second
, where it has Correct article usage
the second
process
of production Add an article
the process
a process
silk
clothes.
Change preposition
of silk
Initially
, first
Change the article
the first
stage
shows us how eggs are laying on the overside of mulberry leaf and remaining
there for between 10 days. Wrong verb form
remain
After
this
, silkworm larvae emerge from the eggs and continue in that form during
4-6 weeks. At Change preposition
for
this
time larvae is
eating its Change the verb form
are
first
place — mulberry leaf. At the end
of six weeks, larvae is turning
into Wrong verb form
turn
silk
throad
for 3-8 days. After Correct your spelling
thread
third
Change the article
the third
stage
, silk
throads
are standing Correct your spelling
threads
cocoon
. Fix the agreement mistake
cocoons
This
step the
Add a missing verb
is the
last
for first
Correct article usage
the first
diagram
.
The second
diagram
shows that the cocoon
uses
for Wrong verb form
is used
production
of Add an article
the production
silk
clothes. First
Change the article
The first
stage
is a select some cocoons and after
this
, for second
Change the article
the second
stage
, it is putted
in the water. Correct your spelling
put
Following
this
, cocoons are unwinded for 300-900 thread. The
next phase,Change preposition
In the
thread
is twisted and dyed in different colours. Add an article
the thread
a thread
At the end
of the process, twisted threads are weaved and for last
part again are put in Correct article usage
the last
container
for dyeing.Add an article
a container
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this, at the end, last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words first, diagram, second, silk, cocoon, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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