The chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various time activities in England.
The provided chart illustrates the proportion of males and females doing divergent activities throughout their leisure time in England.
In general, it can be observed that
men
prefer many creational entertainment, while
women
spend their spare time on reasonable ideas, Additionally
, both genders are not interested in playing computer games compared with of-leisure activities.
Looking at the chart in detail, the proportion of watching TV, and spending time with family of both genders had a slight difference, with all over 75%. In terms of doing sport or exercise and reading, men
are preferable with exactly 75% and around 73%, in comparison with around 72% and 70%, respectively.
With regard to the remaining statistics, there was a significant difference between males and females. The proportion of women
who went shopping was nearly three times higher than that of male
, at around 75% and over 25%, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
males
By contrast
, the opposite trend was seen in internet usage, with approximately 75% compared with about 35% of women
. While
the figure for playing computer games in both men
and women
was the lowest, the ratio for men
was relatively higher than for women
, at 23% and 19%, respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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