The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison were relevant
Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to different methods of drinkable
water
produced by solar powdered pumps and filters. Overall
, it is a complex process with 5 primary stages commencing with sunlight and culminating with drinking water
in a moveable container.
The initial stage focuses on solar panels which are provided solar power by the sun before the solar energy is converted to electricity by a converter. Following
this
step, electricity is transported to a pump which is located at the bottom of the underground well.Moreover
,the ensuing stage involves drink which is pumped to a rain tank placed on a wooden platform by the pump.
Moving onto the subsequent stage of well drink which is filtered into drinkable rain by a filter when the tap is open. In the penultimate juncture, drinking water
is transported through a pipe with a tap to the moveable container.Furthermore
, the process is finally
complete with drinkable water
contained in a moveable container prepared for use.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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