The
given
bar chart compares the popularity of seven leisure activities between Verb problem
apply
two
genders in England.
Correct article usage
the two
Overall
, using computer games for free time seemed not to be attractive among both sexes. Linking Words
Additionally
, more Linking Words
men
than women opted for almost all activities with the exception of shopping and being with family.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, over Linking Words
three quarters
of both sexes watched TV in Add a hyphen
three-quarters
free
time, closely followed by exactly 75% for family time Correct pronoun usage
their free
spending
. Replace the word
spent
Moreover
, the figures for doing exercises and reading were nearly the same, at which the percentage of Linking Words
men
was just under 75% and the proportion Use synonyms
for
their counterparts was approximately 70%.
Turning to the remaining statistics, the majority of Change preposition
of
men
got access to the internet during their leisure moments, at well over 75%, compared to just about a third Use synonyms
for
female counterparts. Change preposition
of
Otherwise
, shopping pique women’s interest the most, with 75% of them and over a fourth of Linking Words
men
Use synonyms
decided
to Wrong verb form
deciding
do
. Interestingly, the figures for computer games Correct pronoun usage
do it
was
fairly low, at just under a fifth.Correct subject-verb agreement
were