The line graphs shows the value of Australia's trade with China, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in $AUD billions

The line graphs shows the value of Australia's trade with China, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in $AUD billions
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The line charts provided information on Australia's importation and exportation value with three nations, namely
China
, the
USA
and
Japan
valued in
Australian
dollars between 2002 and 2005.
Overall
, all buying and selling increased over the given period even though business with the nation of
China
fluctuated at some point. Starting with importation, in 2002, Australia brought in goods from
China
with around $4.3
billion
AUD
, importation from the
USA
started with just above $1.5
billion
AUD
,
however
business with
Japan
in the same year was below $1
billion
AUD
. By 2003,
Australian
trade with
China
had plummeted, it
however
rose significantly and by 2005 it was already at $4.5
billion
AUD
.
However
, the
USA
and
Japan
had almost the same trend, they both had marginally increased and by 2004 they increased drastically with the
USA
reaching $2.3
billion
AUD
,
although
by 2005 it had slightly dropped
however
,
Japan
further
increased to about 1.7
billion
Australian
dollars. On the exportation route, Australia exported to
China
and the
USA
was below $2.5
billion
AUD
in 2002
while
that of
Japan
was slightly above $1
billion
AUD
.
Although
the value of goods the
China
reached its peak in 2003, by 2004 it had decreased significantly, it
however
rose to just below $3
billion
Australian
dollars. The value of goods that were exported to the
USA
and
Japan
increased year on year and by 2005 it had risen to around $2.8
billion
AUD
and $2.6
billion
AUD
respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, usa, japan, australian, billion, aud with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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