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The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart provides a comparison between the
number
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 of Korean citizens who
took
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had
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 cosmetic surgery in 2004. From an
overall
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 perspective, there are five main kinds of procedures that men and women perform most.
In addition
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, Rhinoplasty, Laser Skin Resurfacing and Hair Transplantation dominated the two remaining categories . Looking at the figures for the three sorts of surgeries that were mentioned before, Hair transplantation had the highest
number
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, at 60000
people
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. Followed by the figure for Laser Skin Resurfacing, was in the vicinity of 55000 men, compared to the data on Rhinoplasty, which was lower than the
number
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 of
people
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 taking Laser Skin Resurfacing by 15000 dwellers, at exactly 400000 individuals. Turning to the two lowest data on the graph above, Abdominoplasty only accounted for nearly 20000
people
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, which was one-third of the highest one.
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, the lowest
number
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 of
people
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 having those kinds of cosmetic surgery belonged to Surgery type Facelt, at approximately 16000 persons in 2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cosmetic procedures
  • males
  • females
  • Korea
  • 2004
  • compare
  • contrast
  • most common
  • least common
  • significant trends
  • patterns
  • popularity
  • specific procedures
  • differences
  • number of procedures
  • data
  • general comparison
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