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After Staying in a hotel in another city for a week when you got home, you discovered that you had forgotten something of value in the hotel room. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, •Describe the item you forgot and say where you left it •ask hotel to send it to you •Suggest a way to pay for the postage.

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well, I am writing
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Linking Words

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 letter to inform you that
regarding
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apply

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my phone
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has

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 been
losing
Wrong verb form
lost

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb losing. Consider changing it.

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 at your hotel. First of all, the brand of mobile phone is
Iphone
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iPhone

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13 with white colour, it has
high
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a high

The noun phrase high specification seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 specification.
Furthermore
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, I think I had been lost on the chair. I deeply apologize as
customer
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a customer

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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

due
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because

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 to had forgotten about what happened, and I hope you can send it to me. I will give you my address that you can use. I would like to give you
solution
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a solution
the solution

The noun phrase solution seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 that during postage I will pay
the
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for the

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 service and
geniunly
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genuinely
genuine

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respect. Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing you soon Yours
Sincerenly
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Sincerely

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Provide more detailed information such as the room number and the date of your stay for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs. Separate the item description, the request, and payment suggestion in different paragraphs.
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Use polite and formal language consistently, and avoid abrupt phrases. Make sure to proofread for grammatical consistency.
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You clearly identified the item and mentioned its specifics which makes it easier to locate.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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