After Staying in a hotel in another city for a week when you got home, you discovered that you had forgotten something of value in the hotel room. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, •Describe the item you forgot and say where you left it •ask hotel to send it to you •Suggest a way to pay for the postage.
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that regarding
my phone Change preposition
apply
have
been Correct subject-verb agreement
has
losing
at your hotel.
First of all, the brand of mobile phone is Wrong verb form
lost
Iphone
13 with white colour, it has Correct your spelling
iPhone
high
specification. Add an article
a high
Furthermore
, I think I had been lost on the chair.
I deeply apologize as customer
Correct article usage
a customer
due
to had forgotten about what happened, and I hope you can send it to me. I will give you my address that you can use.
I would like to give you Change preposition
because
solution
that during postage I will pay Add an article
a solution
the solution
the
service and Change preposition
for the
geniunly
respect.
Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing you soon
Yours Correct your spelling
genuinely
genuine
Sincerenly
JackCorrect your spelling
Sincerely
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task achievement
Provide more detailed information such as the room number and the date of your stay for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs. Separate the item description, the request, and payment suggestion in different paragraphs.
task achievement
Use polite and formal language consistently, and avoid abrupt phrases. Make sure to proofread for grammatical consistency.
task achievement
You clearly identified the item and mentioned its specifics which makes it easier to locate.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,